I just posted another update. I managed to work in one of your lines. See clause 18.
Regarding tRump voters, I think Tom Friedman hit the nail on the head in this column:
The Democrats can be…[Read more]
I don’t know de Adder, but that cartoon is infamous. He would be great for illustrations if he would do it.
If your plan is as you say, it seems a good cause to me. Edit as you will.
OK. If you come up with any more verses, please send them along.
Here is a potential additional verse for you. I can come up with more if you want.
Good stuff. I made a few edits. Check it out and let me know if you see any improvements.
That de Adder cartoon is perfect. I wonder if he would be interested in doing some illustrations.
If you are asking for edits, the only thing I saw that I would change, so far, is that instead of “Dr.” Frakenstein I would say “Doc” Frankenstein. The cadence is better with the single syllable of “Doc” as opposed to 2 syllables with “Dr.”.
Very good, I’ve made that change
If you want more verses. I will mull it over.
Go for it
Walt Kelly replied to the topic Looking for collaborators on political satire project in the forum Introduce Yourself 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Great. I just posted the details in the Politics section.
Several months ago, I started writing a little satirical poem entitled Trumpty Dumpty, based on the children’s nursery rhyme Humpty Dumpty. It started out as just a joke among friends, but it has grown to the point where I think it might be able to help get this monstrosity voted out of office or at least give rational people a bit of a c…[Read more]
Walt Kelly started the topic Looking for collaborators on political satire project in the forum Introduce Yourself 1 month, 2 weeks ago
For several months, I have been working on a political satire poem entitled Trumpty Dumpty, based on the children’s nursery rhyme Humpty Dumpty. The objective is to lampoon the travesty currently residing in the White House.
While searching for a community of critical thinkers, I came across CFI. I am hoping that one or more members of t…[Read more]
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